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Coming Into View

sometimes when asleep and dreaming
I am wide awake
visions flash as thoughts keep streaming
by me as I make
 
concentrated tries to see you
lying in your bed
I am drawn and I am pulled by
all that you have said
 
in the mornings, in the evenings
and too in the between
titillating, tantalizing
still you are unseen
 
visions flashing, thoughts keep streaming
lying in my bed
are you near me? can you hear me?
the things that I have said
 
wide awake while I am dreaming
wondering if you
will take away the veil between us
by coming into view
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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