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Add Another View

haven't seen you
heard your voice
do not know where you

in a heartbeat
made the choice
to add another view -

quietly,
alone at night
or sometime in the day

everything
seemed to be right
to add another play -

listening
to words expand
like ripples in a pond

waves of sound
to understand
that we can go beyond

who we think
we have become
who we feel we are -

we are conscious
like the Sun
and every other star -

these are words
to let you know
I am there with you

invisibly
each time you go
to where I have been too -
bcpoet
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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