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murderer (passion)
I want to fuck you up
drop a rock onto your face
once?
twice?
however many times it take to break your skull apart
to make you perish
leave your shell behind for me to...
bask in the glory of severing a soul...
from it's place here
and I'll leave you
broken
like a pile of garbage on the side of the fucking road
(by breaking you)
(I become whole)
drop a rock onto your face
once?
twice?
however many times it take to break your skull apart
to make you perish
leave your shell behind for me to...
bask in the glory of severing a soul...
from it's place here
and I'll leave you
broken
like a pile of garbage on the side of the fucking road
(by breaking you)
(I become whole)
Published 16th Jan 2010
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Anonymous
17th Jan 2010 6:21pm
"bask in the glory of severing a soul..." Love that line. Like all your short pieces, this one compels with a few words and resonates in the mind with terrible force after it has been read. The final two lines in brackets added an even more sinister feel to what preceded it. I wonder if the characters from this and the previous instalment of the "evil" saga could be one and the same, and if so, if you might perhaps write some more poems and stories about him which offer backstory? Just a thought.
17th Jan 2010 6:26pm
well I'm actually going to change the title of this to "murderer (passion)" and take it out of the evil series.. because the evil series were about some things I went through but this one was just fictional..
"resonates in the mind with terrible force" thanks for that.. and thanks for reading.. as always so glad you dig it.. cheers..
"resonates in the mind with terrible force" thanks for that.. and thanks for reading.. as always so glad you dig it.. cheers..
