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byDaKo,SatSep17,2011at11:07am
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aye, me vanities a'company [of]
me, haunt me thrill me's stupidass
mirrorview so many times gone'round'bout
no thing / clogged'up like arterial rot of
Everything eye've pleasur'eaten
consum'ed b4 seeing thee light [of]
accepting thee dark
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28
no'more home com[ings] to have come
home to home[less]too + no wicked
orphanage 2shelter you, mee too, then
every body all-fall-down, then quiet stand
up, [then] quiet[ly] gone walked
gone away
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29
enjoy th'is [from] goodistance /....mortalbody
hovering a'bove a darkhole[in]cold'earth, no
one near no one [else] any wh'ere....&here&here
&h'ere weego.../...o'jeez, tha's not my'daddy....
daddybody burned'turned to ash when no
body was watching at all / & all
of goodistance
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sptmbr2011dkzk
27
aye, me vanities a'company [of]
me, haunt me thrill me's stupidass
mirrorview so many times gone'round'bout
no thing / clogged'up like arterial rot of
Everything eye've pleasur'eaten
consum'ed b4 seeing thee light [of]
accepting thee dark
______________________________
28
no'more home com[ings] to have come
home to home[less]too + no wicked
orphanage 2shelter you, mee too, then
every body all-fall-down, then quiet stand
up, [then] quiet[ly] gone walked
gone away
_______________________________
29
enjoy th'is [from] goodistance /....mortalbody
hovering a'bove a darkhole[in]cold'earth, no
one near no one [else] any wh'ere....&here&here
&h'ere weego.../...o'jeez, tha's not my'daddy....
daddybody burned'turned to ash when no
body was watching at all / & all
of goodistance
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sptmbr2011dkzk
Published 25th Jan 2012
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25th Jan 2012 5:32pm
For obvious reasons this resonated with me, except for the part of my own mortality. I still got some years head till I can wrap my head around that
aw,cmon, Matt, ain't none of Us have any idear howmany
years,months,days wee may "have left"....
i died b4 my 48th b'day, but supposedly "survived" in somekinda bizarre form like Casper The Ghost in the Twilight Zone. At least once a day I get this peripheral glimpse of Rod Serling leaning on a lampost, flicking a ciggie & smirking at me (whilst the Casper theme song is playin off in the distance). Then when I turn'round t'say "Hi,Rod. I love your show", he's gone.
never too early to delve into 'mortality' as a hobby...but often it becomes too-late to taste of the paradoxymoronic joys & pleasures there'in if'n ye put-it-off !!....y'never 'know', daddy'o.
Kinda scary, but WTF ?
g'odd bless ye, buddy!
years,months,days wee may "have left"....
i died b4 my 48th b'day, but supposedly "survived" in somekinda bizarre form like Casper The Ghost in the Twilight Zone. At least once a day I get this peripheral glimpse of Rod Serling leaning on a lampost, flicking a ciggie & smirking at me (whilst the Casper theme song is playin off in the distance). Then when I turn'round t'say "Hi,Rod. I love your show", he's gone.
never too early to delve into 'mortality' as a hobby...but often it becomes too-late to taste of the paradoxymoronic joys & pleasures there'in if'n ye put-it-off !!....y'never 'know', daddy'o.
Kinda scary, but WTF ?
g'odd bless ye, buddy!
1st Oct 2012 1:55am
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