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The Playwright
Sensual thoughts of desire
To your libidous strength
I shall comply
Let me unleash your every sighs
As i pleasure you with lust
down your very spine
My sultry lips
And sweet hot breath
A tongue that glides through
From all spots that you need it to
A hand that runs Into your skin
A sordid fun, a delightful scheme
Cuff me in your bed
And let my skin rub
Unto this velvety sheets
I'll allow you to do as you please
But baby lets play it rough
Wont you, please? 💋
(c)mai8.6.20
To your libidous strength
I shall comply
Let me unleash your every sighs
As i pleasure you with lust
down your very spine
My sultry lips
And sweet hot breath
A tongue that glides through
From all spots that you need it to
A hand that runs Into your skin
A sordid fun, a delightful scheme
Cuff me in your bed
And let my skin rub
Unto this velvety sheets
I'll allow you to do as you please
But baby lets play it rough
Wont you, please? 💋
(c)mai8.6.20
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Re. The Playwright
5th Aug 2020 11:47pm
Re. The Playwright
6th Aug 2020 00:02am
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6th Aug 2020 00:17am
Re. The Playwright
6th Aug 2020 00:52am
enjoyed your descriptive way.
captivating, your write!
thank you for sharing.
captivating, your write!
thank you for sharing.
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6th Aug 2020 1:04am
Re. The Playwright
6th Aug 2020 12:50pm
It was an interesting phrasing to suggest “releasing a sigh”. In the phrase you captured both aggressive control and the softness of intimacy. Your narrator wants to both give pleasure to their partner, and to be controlled by them. This made your poem Dark and Interesting.
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6th Aug 2020 3:14pm
Wowww! You must have been writing like forever! Thanks so much. Its deeply appreciated 😍
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Aug 2020 00:18am
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Re: Re. The Playwright
7th Aug 2020 00:44am
Would i wait for you to make me?
And would you even take me seriously?
When all i could think of
Is the shaft and the hard on
Whilst my tongue years to play
The scrotum in between your thighs 😇😂😛✌
And would you even take me seriously?
When all i could think of
Is the shaft and the hard on
Whilst my tongue years to play
The scrotum in between your thighs 😇😂😛✌
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Aug 2020 00:59am
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7th Aug 2020 1:11am
A boy talks
Whilst a man moves
Would you like me to play
On your orgasmic mood
Be still and dont move
For i will sway you
. . . into this groove
💋✌😇
Whilst a man moves
Would you like me to play
On your orgasmic mood
Be still and dont move
For i will sway you
. . . into this groove
💋✌😇
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Aug 2020 1:14am
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Re. The Playwright
7th Aug 2020 4:10pm
What a perfect and engaging picture of a real erotic moment...such a turnon. Thanks for sharing.Peace. oral
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7th Aug 2020 4:14pm
Thanks so much. Glad you appreciate it somehow . . . Stay safe and gave a good day/night 🙂🙃🙂