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All I hear
All I hear from you are promise from you
then i hear the empty promises you made and
the promises you made turned into lies
That breaks my heart and shatters our lives,
I love you to the moon and back but
its hard to trust you even though you try not to lie about doing better
my trust is nearly gone and hope is for you is almost lost,
we argue and argue over and over again
What are we fighting for and who really pays the cost?
When you tell me you're sorry but you do it again,
Why do i believe you, why do i keep giving in?
hoping for the best when its never gonna be
When we finally realize we just don't work and
it all was just a big mistake
then i hear the empty promises you made and
the promises you made turned into lies
That breaks my heart and shatters our lives,
I love you to the moon and back but
its hard to trust you even though you try not to lie about doing better
my trust is nearly gone and hope is for you is almost lost,
we argue and argue over and over again
What are we fighting for and who really pays the cost?
When you tell me you're sorry but you do it again,
Why do i believe you, why do i keep giving in?
hoping for the best when its never gonna be
When we finally realize we just don't work and
it all was just a big mistake
Published 31st Jul 2020
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17th Aug 2020 11:57pm
Dear B,
There is such a rawness to this write. I like the conversational style you’ve written it as. It applies to so many of us in times of strain and stress. I wish you all the best for a positive outcome. Well written. H🌷
There is such a rawness to this write. I like the conversational style you’ve written it as. It applies to so many of us in times of strain and stress. I wish you all the best for a positive outcome. Well written. H🌷
