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Her #1 Fan
everytime she walks into a room
like a superstar
I'm caught off guard
flashing lights from my mind
burning her imagine into my forever memories
hey,
what can I say
I'm a big fan
stunning how she dolls up
today black lace
swaying with a confidence that could kill
and I'm the one each steps towards
like a lady praying mantis about to feast
hey,
what can I say
I'm a big fan
I want to take her in my arms
rip her dress down to the floor
show just how much I appreciate her beauty
with leaving hickeys on her neck
as we start to get this poetry in motion
hey,
what can I say
I'm a big fan
the best thing about all this is
knowing it's not just a dream
I get to wake up to my ultimate fantasy
morning kisses that get me love drunk
and I'm never sobering up
like a superstar
I'm caught off guard
flashing lights from my mind
burning her imagine into my forever memories
hey,
what can I say
I'm a big fan
stunning how she dolls up
today black lace
swaying with a confidence that could kill
and I'm the one each steps towards
like a lady praying mantis about to feast
hey,
what can I say
I'm a big fan
I want to take her in my arms
rip her dress down to the floor
show just how much I appreciate her beauty
with leaving hickeys on her neck
as we start to get this poetry in motion
hey,
what can I say
I'm a big fan
the best thing about all this is
knowing it's not just a dream
I get to wake up to my ultimate fantasy
morning kisses that get me love drunk
and I'm never sobering up
Published 6th Jul 2020
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7th Jul 2020 10:21pm
"morning kisses that get me love drunk
and I'm never sobering up"
" as we start to get this poetry in motion"
These are some really great lines in this fabulous spill...wonderful ink in its entirety. 👏🏻
and I'm never sobering up"
" as we start to get this poetry in motion"
These are some really great lines in this fabulous spill...wonderful ink in its entirety. 👏🏻
8th Jul 2020 8:20am
Thanks friend 😁 glad to still see you around.
I love to write about my partner. Probably mostly because I don't have much family around where we live so my world mostly revolves around her. Not such a bad thing.
I love to write about my partner. Probably mostly because I don't have much family around where we live so my world mostly revolves around her. Not such a bad thing.
8th Jul 2020 8:26am
Your partner is very lucky to have someone who is so much in love with her and paints her life with beautiful poems about her...
That's what most of us women dream of...
That's what most of us women dream of...
16th Jul 2020 9:28pm
Really beautiful writing full of love and adoration, and a sensual intimacy. I love the ending. This is how love should be.
