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Senryu - :)
Heady scent lingers
recall sounds of ecstasy
post coital tidy
recall sounds of ecstasy
post coital tidy
Published 5th Jul 2020
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Muse inspired <3
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5th Jul 2020 7:54pm
Love the last line ... took me away ... in another direction ... by design ...
5th Jul 2020 9:36pm
Dear, Soledad, I am always touched, in a happy way, when you like what I write and you can take away something good from my words.
6th Jul 2020 2:53am
You’ve successfully managed to create a tidy little poem within the confinement of a senryu poem. I’ve never tried something like that...well done
6th Jul 2020 2:57am
