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Frozen
Somewhere, far away
the stars cry
glistening teardrops frozen
forever...in the dark sky
the stars cry
glistening teardrops frozen
forever...in the dark sky
Written by
InDreamz
Published 28th May 2020
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Re. Frozen
28th May 2020 10:06pm
Love this one ... its simplicity ... its resonance ... the great line breaks ...
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Re. Frozen
29th May 2020 4:12am
We are frozen in sadness, but we must fight to get our emotions in check. It takes to heal from sadness. Keep on writing.
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Re. Frozen
29th May 2020 7:11am
This shows such a depth. Having to deal with my own depression this really talk to me. thanks for sharing 😁
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Re. Frozen
4th Jun 2020 8:47pm
So much said all wrapped up in such simplicity...somewhere, the stars cry was an amazing expression. You truly have a gift. It's so nice you joined us, I'm glad!💞
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I try to do my best. My mind conceived these lines while star gazing... This ink is a reflection of a piece of my life...
Thanks a tonne, dear Pandora. It's so mentally, emotionally n poetically enriching to be here on DUP amongst great poets and beautiful souls like you.
Though, I'll admit... I have been on DUP before...
Thanks a tonne, dear Pandora. It's so mentally, emotionally n poetically enriching to be here on DUP amongst great poets and beautiful souls like you.
Though, I'll admit... I have been on DUP before...
Re: Re. Frozen
9th Jun 2020 3:39am
Oh, I most definitely agree with your assessment on the Deep. We're family and I admit in my introduction that losing that spark made me retreat, but I'm finally dancing to its replishing song again. Sigh.
I'm fortunate for your return, I thought the angel avi looked familiar, but I saw no long proof of presence. It's great to have you back and finally stumble upon your beautiful work.💞💐
I'm fortunate for your return, I thought the angel avi looked familiar, but I saw no long proof of presence. It's great to have you back and finally stumble upon your beautiful work.💞💐
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9th Jun 2020 10:08am
Dup is addictive 😊
We used to follow each other when I was active here through my old account. 😊 though I prefer being incognito now... May be for a while...I'm kinda keeping a low profile of myself... Not as active as I was here on my previous dup incarnate.
I had few reasons to leave this site but hell yeah... DUP is irresistible! So difficult to live without the Deep....
We used to follow each other when I was active here through my old account. 😊 though I prefer being incognito now... May be for a while...I'm kinda keeping a low profile of myself... Not as active as I was here on my previous dup incarnate.
I had few reasons to leave this site but hell yeah... DUP is irresistible! So difficult to live without the Deep....
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10th Jun 2020 9:00pm
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13th Jun 2020 7:36pm
Thanks once again for appreciating this humble piece. Glad it made it to your reading list.
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27th Jul 2020 9:26pm
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