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Self-Therapy session
When I start to fade from bright to dull
And the flame inside my soul starts to die
I lose control over will-power and hysteria
The tears inside me starts to flow
And those voices in my head
When they say:
"I love you"
Makes it even worse
Why should I try
If in the end
It's all for nothing
Or all for something worthless
And the flame inside my soul starts to die
I lose control over will-power and hysteria
The tears inside me starts to flow
And those voices in my head
When they say:
"I love you"
Makes it even worse
Why should I try
If in the end
It's all for nothing
Or all for something worthless
Published 15th Jan 2012
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7th Feb 2012 6:20pm
Was a fun poem
Thank you to something beautiful and pure
Stems from the heart
And feeling good
Honest expression of feeling
8th Feb 2012 3:55am
9th Feb 2012 00:06am
As 'LuvSxe' said, this is a poem of honest feeling and from the heart. However I did not quite like my stay so instead I built another house, http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/40923-un-self-theraphy-session-a-reply-to/. I realize this is a personal poem and celebrate that, but I couldn't help but be personal in return.
9th Feb 2012 5:01am
Hahaha that's great :) i'd like to read your version! My version, to me, does not feel that complete yet.. I need to finish it. It's too shallow for everything I feel hahaha.
