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The beauty of making love
The beauty of imagining it all
The beauty of taking off each other's clothes
The beauty of getting aroused
The beauty of being nude
The beauty of dirty words
The beauty of an erotic kiss
The beauty of touching each other
The beauty of showing it all
The beauty of saying 'let's have sex!'
The beauty of seeing passion in the eyes
The beauty of cunnilingus
The beauty of lustful feelings
The beauty of aroused genitials
The beauty of merging bodies
The beauty of moving rhythms
The beauty of getting wild
The beauty of a shared orgasm.
The beauty of saying 'I love you.'
The beauty of taking off each other's clothes
The beauty of getting aroused
The beauty of being nude
The beauty of dirty words
The beauty of an erotic kiss
The beauty of touching each other
The beauty of showing it all
The beauty of saying 'let's have sex!'
The beauty of seeing passion in the eyes
The beauty of cunnilingus
The beauty of lustful feelings
The beauty of aroused genitials
The beauty of merging bodies
The beauty of moving rhythms
The beauty of getting wild
The beauty of a shared orgasm.
The beauty of saying 'I love you.'
Published 12th May 2020
Author's Note
no serious write for me. Just letting it go. Got aroused while writing it. That's good enough.
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12th May 2020 7:59am
Don't blame you getting aroused, it took this reader with you. The nakedness aspect of such scenes is the most awestriking part for me.
12th May 2020 10:01am
Great job with this ... the flow ... the cadence ... relentless ... stream of consciousness ...
I was just throwing out words. Thanks for calling it 'great'. To me it needs refinement, something like a true climax of words.
16th Jun 2020 6:49pm
Being paralyzed most is done in my mind like most but not all of my work. Loved this
