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grits
Beautiful bowl of grits,
steamy southern comfort -
you make the mornings.
I could never get tired of you.
I feel like the god in your creation story
when I cut off the stove,
spooning down fluffy gold
folds of you
into a big ol' bowl.
You're perfect,
so much so
you beg to be consumed.
Slowly.
I give you
one last drop
of tabasco
and a moment, a scent
cuts in -
fog on my glasses.
I breathe breakfast,
and investigate -
tip-toe to the window
to check out the sky today.
It is simmering.
Sun scrapes the horizon like a saucepan; there's
gold ribbons falling down on
cold, still street
And Louisiana steam
rising, as it
forever does.
Today is tasty.
Warm.
And the bowl is big.
So we're one
mite of flavor
in a teeny tiny drop in it -
such little grains of salt
riding on a spoonful of time,
we don't notice
it's a bite -
bliss made to end.
So
what?
I'm tasting something
fantastic.
steamy southern comfort -
you make the mornings.
I could never get tired of you.
I feel like the god in your creation story
when I cut off the stove,
spooning down fluffy gold
folds of you
into a big ol' bowl.
You're perfect,
so much so
you beg to be consumed.
Slowly.
I give you
one last drop
of tabasco
and a moment, a scent
cuts in -
fog on my glasses.
I breathe breakfast,
and investigate -
tip-toe to the window
to check out the sky today.
It is simmering.
Sun scrapes the horizon like a saucepan; there's
gold ribbons falling down on
cold, still street
And Louisiana steam
rising, as it
forever does.
Today is tasty.
Warm.
And the bowl is big.
So we're one
mite of flavor
in a teeny tiny drop in it -
such little grains of salt
riding on a spoonful of time,
we don't notice
it's a bite -
bliss made to end.
So
what?
I'm tasting something
fantastic.
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