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Perfect

Written by LostViking

(Lost Viking)

Published 26th Apr 2020

Author's Note

Young love can be dangerous.

#breakup #death #family #LifeChangingMoment #lust

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Re. Perfect

26th Apr 2020 12:48pm

good

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Re. Perfect

26th Apr 2020 1:02pm

I think you meant...

their, and not they�re !

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26th Apr 2020 1:39pm

Damn. I hate doing that. Thanks for catching it.

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Re. Perfect

27th Apr 2020 6:17am

Yes young love can dangerous. Kids in the dark make accidents, Accidents in the dark make kids. Keep on writing.

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