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Suck It
It brings back memories
times of innocence
a relevance
when air was free to breathe
and life held no promises to pain
I stare at the glimmers of hope
watering down in anticipation
crisp crackles
slowly turning
between coarse sun worshiped fingers
inviting
free from her outer coverings
I roll my tongue
around the hardened mound
ecstacy exploded
into each crevice
delved upon my mouth
I smack my gums and look out
as my mind wanders to where life
has just begun
Published 13th Apr 2020
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13th Apr 2020 11:17pm
if this is you eating a lollipop in public, you should be arrested for indecency ltm
13th Apr 2020 11:24pm
14th Apr 2020 00:23am
How wonderful ... full ... vivid ... great flow ... crisp line breaks (my kryptonite) ... well done Tim ...
14th Apr 2020 12:26pm
Is there really a chocolate core in the center of a Tootsie Pop?
You childhood reflection is A LOT DIFFERENT than mine!
Maybe due to different states, eh?
You childhood reflection is A LOT DIFFERENT than mine!
Maybe due to different states, eh?
Anonymous
14th Apr 2020 3:35pm
Now there's a fantastic twist of yummy reality and subtle innuendo there. I kept reading and thinking "I think it's about a candy...but..." and yup! Nicely done!
