Absolution

Very beautifully composed with inspiration as it comes from within the depth of the heart and soul...nicely done poetess

not sure about the title - is it too much of a pun? or too obscure? or just irrelevant?

To answer your question neither for the title that you wrote it fits for to me your title is perfect for it askes a question that we all have ask ourselves at one time or another, if it aint broke dont try to fix it the point of writing your thoughts is to have the readers follower the journey with you within their own mind and heart and soul basically you want them to think...respect dear poetess

Very well done

thank you for passing by and passing such a nice comment

"My roll of tongue,"...love it.

cute but sexy maybe?

Absolution from being in love; while not 100% sure the other is?

there are always more
questions but an absence of
answers to be found

Sexy and thought provoking. Well done.

both qualities I love to offer - thank you

Your friend was quite a muse. Another gritty and erotic offering for lonely men like me.

XoXoXo
John

My friend knew each place
that pleased and, once befriended,
let friendships blossom