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Candy Coated Suicide
Dear candy coated suicide
Im tearing out of this life
Ill swallow razors or a knife
Im ending it... tonight
The red tears of my flesh
Tell me this is best
So forgive me please for all I did wrong
Please dont worry it wont be long...
Until im in the ground, burried, and dead
Before the bathroom floor is covered in red
Before they find me I just want to say
Before I was dead I started to decay
From the inside out... everyday
I dont want to wake up to tomorrow
It takes effort to wake up...
And there no effort in sorrow
Im tearing out of this life
Ill swallow razors or a knife
Im ending it... tonight
The red tears of my flesh
Tell me this is best
So forgive me please for all I did wrong
Please dont worry it wont be long...
Until im in the ground, burried, and dead
Before the bathroom floor is covered in red
Before they find me I just want to say
Before I was dead I started to decay
From the inside out... everyday
I dont want to wake up to tomorrow
It takes effort to wake up...
And there no effort in sorrow
Published 9th Jan 2012
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9th Jan 2012 4:05am
I really liked this poem. I wish there was more emphasis on y the suicide is candy coated unless the meaning is something I didn't catch but overall nice work :)
9th Jan 2012 9:00pm
