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They lay supine
palms facing upwards,
floating just
above the ground.
Their breath is slow,
silent and steady,
from deep within
an emanating sound
begins to spread
throughout the forest
waking birds,
calling to frogs,
it seems to echo
through the valley,
bouncing off the
trees and logs.
Morganpoet
palms facing upwards,
floating just
above the ground.
Their breath is slow,
silent and steady,
from deep within
an emanating sound
begins to spread
throughout the forest
waking birds,
calling to frogs,
it seems to echo
through the valley,
bouncing off the
trees and logs.
Morganpoet
Published 11th Mar 2020
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16th Aug 2020 1:48pm
Dear M,
I like your introduction “ They lay supine
palms facing upwards,“ as though ready to receive gifts from nature being proffered in that moment. There’s a very quiet reverence to this poem that is quite soothing. Lovely write. H🌷
I like your introduction “ They lay supine
palms facing upwards,“ as though ready to receive gifts from nature being proffered in that moment. There’s a very quiet reverence to this poem that is quite soothing. Lovely write. H🌷
