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She Called Me "Super Girl"
Her coffee in my hand, I arrive with ten
minutes to spare, flown in so fast
I had to rebrush my hair, before setting glasses
upon my nose to disguise my face
All she saw was a reliable cup of coffee
and the paper with me on it, holding
a plane, barely able to manage the first
yet she declared me "Super Girl" without
even looking up, as in, to really see me
there, wondering at witnessing my own
naming, unknown, yet present, familiar
being now asked for my approbation
Even though to her I am really nothing
more than a cup of coffee, a snack run
a green, ignorant, envious admirer
if only she knew who I really was...
(Based on "Warming her Pearls")
#CarolAnnDuffy
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minutes to spare, flown in so fast
I had to rebrush my hair, before setting glasses
upon my nose to disguise my face
All she saw was a reliable cup of coffee
and the paper with me on it, holding
a plane, barely able to manage the first
yet she declared me "Super Girl" without
even looking up, as in, to really see me
there, wondering at witnessing my own
naming, unknown, yet present, familiar
being now asked for my approbation
Even though to her I am really nothing
more than a cup of coffee, a snack run
a green, ignorant, envious admirer
if only she knew who I really was...
(Based on "Warming her Pearls")
#CarolAnnDuffy
#hashtag
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