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"What's The Problem ?" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 6/5/2013

These Days I'm ... " Hearing " ...
LOTS of Things ... About Peoples' Relationships ...

ALL Kinds of PROBLEMS Between Women and Men ... ?!?

So I'm Saying Like .... WHAT .... ?!?
The Kind of Stuff Most DEFINE As ... " LOVE " ... !?!

So Let's Get Back To The ... BEGINNING ...
When BOTH Parties Were ... GRINNING ... !!!!!
When There Was A LOT of KISSING ... !!!
And STUFF Others Call ... SINNING ... !!!

SUCKING Dick And OTHER Things ... !!!

Now ALL of a SUDDEN ...
YOU ... "CAN'T STAND HIM !" ...
But Have ... " His Child " ... ?!?

"The Child is MINE !"

Girl ... STOP Frontin' ... !!!!!
So Let Me Get This RIGHT ... ?!?

ALL THAT ... " Sucking " ...
DIDN'T Lead To NOTHING ... !?!

But Then You DISCOVERED ...
You Had A BIG STOMACH ...... !?!
And A Child Was Coming ...

Let Me TELL You Something ... !!!

It Was A DIFFERENT Kind of Coming ...
In Which You Were ... INDULGING ... !!!!!

And ... NOT ALONE ...
NOPE ... DON'T Think So ... !!!


Your Child Is The Product ...
of The ... TWO of You ... !!!!!


Your NEW Conduct Has Me A Bit Confused ... ?!?
So You Just Cool ... I've Heard ENOUGH From You ... !!!!!

So ... What About You Dude ... ???
YEAH That's RIGHT It's Time To Analyse ...
How Things Now FLY With A Lot of Young Guys ... !!!

Most ... DON'T Take Time To RECOGNISE .....
That Girls They Lay ... QUICKER Than Usain ... !!!
Tend NOT To Play The Game ...
In Ways That Allow ... QUICK Getaways ... !!!

QUICK ONES' ... Once The PIPE's Been Laid ...
DON'T Be The ONE To End Up ... " Played " ... !!!

See The Other Night I Looked Into The Sky ...
And Saw A Slip of Light As I Looked To My Right ...
I Saw A SLIT ... of A DIFFERENT Type ... !!!!!

The OTHER Was Between A ... " Pair of Thighs " ... !!!
A PERFECT STREAM On ... One of THOSE Sites ... !!!!!!!!

DON'T Be SURPRISED ... !!!

But ... NO PROBLEMS ...
When It Comes To Women ... !!!!!!!!

Cos' I ... Choose To Be WISE ...
When Dealing With Them ... !!!!!!!!!!!!!

Like PETER TOSH Said ...

"We give them MORE LOVE, than the creator of us !"

NO Wonder When He Said It Peter Felt To CUSS ... !!!

Men NEED To STOP ACTING Like They Are BLIND ... !?!
When It Comes To ALL This RAMMING Some Cock INSIDE ...

THESE UGLY Lovelies ... YEAH That's RIGHT ... !!!
And Then ... Down The Road COMPLAINING ...
About Their NEWFOUND Vibe ...

Bet THAT WASN'T What Was PLAYING ...
Once They Got To SPREAD Their Thighs ... !!!!!!!!

Let Me Guess Son In YOUR MIND You Were Thinking...

"Yeah, can't wait to get some head !"

So Let Me Ask You THIS Then ... ?

" What's The PROBLEM ? "

DIDN'T You Get Head From Her In The END ... ?!?

"She's Different Now !"

"Probably, like you ?"

"She's acting foul !"

"So what ya gonna do ?"

"Man, I don't know !"

"Should of thought of that bro,
before you dug her hole instead of delving down into her soul !
Maybe you'd of found out, what you NEEDED To KNOW !"


And ON THAT Note ... Here's ONE LAST Question ...
When You Look Back At The Choices THAT You've UNDERTAKEN ...

My Question Is THIS ...

" What's The Problem ? "
Written by BigVirge (Big Virge)
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Author's Note
Relationships have always been hard, but, in more recent times, they seem to have become a very difficult thing to maintain, hence the question ?
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