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What it takes frustrating

What am I doing wrong?
All I want is a straight forward answer to a straight forward question.

Background:
I look at you and think to myself "you are so and so age". Therefore, you have been living with you for so and so years.
You, having been living with you for so and so years, knows everything there is to know about you.

I mean,
who occupys your body other than you and your self?

So when I ask you.
What would it take,
in order
for me
to have you
all to my self?
Why can't you tell me what it woud take?
Written by Rodin1221 (Stanley Satchell)
Published
Author's Note
After a while, I think you needn't be a mystery to your self
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