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The Weight of Reality
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The Weight of Reality
"It was just a dream"
I have to remind myself,
But pain remains.
🥀
Written by
PencilScribbles
(Scribbles)
Published
18th Feb 2020
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It's okay.
https://youtu.be/syO6Oi7-4TM
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#dreams
#forgiveness
#hurt
#regret
#sadness
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Re. The Weight of Reality
buddhakitty
18th Feb 2020 3:56am
In the end, we can not change what has come before and all we are left with is learning to be okay. Thoughtful write Scribble.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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PencilScribbles
(Scribbles)
18th Feb 2020 4:20am
Than you so much, buddakitty ❤
You are absolutely right.
Hugs back at you. 🌹
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Re. The Weight of Reality
CosiestPrism273
(Jordan Kunkel)
18th Feb 2020 4:01am
Well written. I enjoyed this.
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PencilScribbles
(Scribbles)
18th Feb 2020 4:22am
😊
Thanks again, CosiestPrism ❤
Your feedback puts a smile on my face.
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Re. The Weight of Reality
Ahavati
(Tams)
18th Feb 2020 2:26pm
It always helps to view the pain as one of growing, be it physically or spiritually. A very introspective write in so few words. Well done.
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Re: Re. The Weight of Reality
PencilScribbles
(Scribbles)
18th Feb 2020 3:03pm
Thank you, Ahavati ❤
Like a plant that receives no resistance from the wind will be too weak to stand and grow...I see the benefit in the pain and this too will help me grow.
Thank you so much for your kind and inspiring words.
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