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For just awhile
Hold me darling just awhile.
Splendid time i see in your smile.
Tell me baby it'll be awhile.
How long since I held you.
Felt the passion burning so true.
To have you forever nothing I won't do.
How have i made this long without you.
Let me scoop you up in my arms.
Ooohhh baby lost in your charms.
Feel the kisses coming in swarms.
We long survived lifes storms.
Let me hold you baby awhile.
Spend forever in your deep warm smile.
Heaven called you home.
Now I'm here all alone.
My love for you hasn't gone.
It still burning strong.
Hold me darling just awhile.
Splendid time i see in your smile.
Tell me baby it'll be awhile.
If i have to hold with all my might.
Or I only get you for the night.
Hold me darling just awhile.
Splendid time i see in your smile.
Tell me baby it'll be awhile.
Splendid time i see in your smile.
Tell me baby it'll be awhile.
How long since I held you.
Felt the passion burning so true.
To have you forever nothing I won't do.
How have i made this long without you.
Let me scoop you up in my arms.
Ooohhh baby lost in your charms.
Feel the kisses coming in swarms.
We long survived lifes storms.
Let me hold you baby awhile.
Spend forever in your deep warm smile.
Heaven called you home.
Now I'm here all alone.
My love for you hasn't gone.
It still burning strong.
Hold me darling just awhile.
Splendid time i see in your smile.
Tell me baby it'll be awhile.
If i have to hold with all my might.
Or I only get you for the night.
Hold me darling just awhile.
Splendid time i see in your smile.
Tell me baby it'll be awhile.
Published 16th Feb 2020
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16th Feb 2020 6:25am
Dear J,
This is beautiful. An extremely tight write with so much passion. The loss is palpable and I am very sorry. You are very generous and thoughtful writer. Your willingness to share this is so helpful to me, as a way of allowing people in to help me when I’m sad. Thank you. H🌷
This is beautiful. An extremely tight write with so much passion. The loss is palpable and I am very sorry. You are very generous and thoughtful writer. Your willingness to share this is so helpful to me, as a way of allowing people in to help me when I’m sad. Thank you. H🌷
16th Feb 2020 1:32pm
Love the depth and raw honesty that shines brightly throughout your write, Jiminex... 🌻
