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I'm so tired
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I'm so tired
And in that moment
You felt like home
Written by
Whipped
(Diz)
Published
13th Feb 2020
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#minimalist
#respect
#ShortStory
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Re. I'm so tired
Phantom2426
(Francisco J Vera)
13th Feb 2020 6:38am
You live for the moment and does feel like you are home in that moment. Keep on writing.
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Re. I'm so tired
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Feb 2020 1:16pm
13th Feb 2020 1:15pm
it is wide open to interpretation, but solid in its simplicity.
I took the liberty of adding #minimalist and #shortstory to your themes.
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Re. I'm so tired
Whipped
(Diz)
13th Feb 2020 1:30pm
Yes I do live in the moment. Knowing that people go back to their own lives in the next. Sometimes I need that hand to hold or that body to lean on because I am human .
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Re. I'm so tired
InDreamz
28th Oct 2020 12:17pm
In just few words you said a lot... Love the depth this succinct piece displays...
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Re. I'm so tired
DaVinci_07
(Leo)
17th Nov 2020 00:20am
Familiarity, at times, is under-rated.
I like your words could be for a person, place or thing.
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Re. I'm so tired
Whipped
(Diz)
17th Nov 2020 00:23am
Likewise
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