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Forgetful Love
Don’t forget me
Or the feelings that could be,
If today I was to die
To the heavens I hope to fly,
My dear please know
That I’m not afraid to go,
Please don’t ever be sad
For when I’m gone I’ll be glad,
Please remind me to tell you
I love you too…
Published 5th Jan 2012
| Edited 22nd Apr 2012
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27th Mar 2012 4:56pm
Very nice, I love the use of rhyme. However, I don't feel that it is necessary to add commas after every line. Hope this helps!
