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AMERICA

A sucking sound
As it slides down

The shape of the can
Persists in the pan
SatInUGal
Written by SatInUGal (Kumar)
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Re. AMERICA
5th Feb 2020 11:18pm
So so true ... nice poeting ...
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. AMERICA
(Kumar)
5th Feb 2020 11:55pm
Thank you LilDragonFly!
SatInUGal
Re. AMERICA
6th Feb 2020 00:20am
https://youtu.be/j3Pe0oUqFkw
shadow_starzzz
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Re: Re. AMERICA
(Kumar)
6th Feb 2020 1:00am
YES!
SatInUGal
Re. AMERICA
6th Feb 2020 4:02pm
I’ve heard that sound. Nicely written.
Kinkpoet
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Re: Re. AMERICA
(Kumar)
7th Feb 2020 2:50am
Thank you!
SatInUGal

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