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Longing
You are the shape of sleep,
moon sung,
sky voiced,
star graced,
and I a threadbare wanderer,
night lost,
in need of you.
moon sung,
sky voiced,
star graced,
and I a threadbare wanderer,
night lost,
in need of you.
Published 5th Feb 2020
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5th Feb 2020 9:47pm
I am pleased you liked it, especially since I have an interlocutor here who has claimed that everything I post here should be regarded as poorly written and, moreover, not poetry.
6th Feb 2020 6:05pm
5th Feb 2020 10:58pm
I love the brevity and honesty in this, it’s gorgeous... and it reinforces the notion of brevity being the soul of wit !
An awesomely tender write... 🌻
An awesomely tender write... 🌻
5th Feb 2020 11:50pm
6th Feb 2020 2:26am
6th Feb 2020 3:58am
6th Feb 2020 3:31am
"You are the shape of sleep" is one of the best lines I have read and fits perfectly with a poem titled "Longing". Awesome.
6th Feb 2020 3:58am
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