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Idealisation
I do not miss you
I miss my creation
The person I knew
Was idealisation
Well, I should keep
These comfort-characters
Only for stories
For make-believe
They don't belong
On physical forms.
I miss my creation
The person I knew
Was idealisation
Well, I should keep
These comfort-characters
Only for stories
For make-believe
They don't belong
On physical forms.
Published 4th Feb 2020
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4th Feb 2020 7:41pm
although You miss Your past
Your present self might be missing Your personal self
who has triumphed and grown and moved beyond the past that misses that time on the linear path. . .
I 100% understood and wish for You that You
either have OR will move on to discover the alternate to Your past...........
Your present self might be missing Your personal self
who has triumphed and grown and moved beyond the past that misses that time on the linear path. . .
I 100% understood and wish for You that You
either have OR will move on to discover the alternate to Your past...........
4th Feb 2020 8:55pm
5th Feb 2020 5:41am
5th Feb 2020 7:41pm
"I miss my creation" ... so much depth with this ... excellent line ... nice poeting ...
