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race
They damaged and mutilated
a new race
they must have known
that radiation doesnt clone
it geneticly twists
and reforms
into thoughts
that should have never
been born
a new race
they must have known
that radiation doesnt clone
it geneticly twists
and reforms
into thoughts
that should have never
been born
Published 4th Jan 2012
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4th Jan 2012 10:46pm
a small typo: 'genetically'
there's not much to say for it, other than its being truthful and thought provoking.
keep it up :)
there's not much to say for it, other than its being truthful and thought provoking.
keep it up :)
5th Jan 2012 8:14am
24th May 2013 8:25pm
I really liked this poem, it was short and poignant but it told a truth in a way that was fresh. Nice work
25th May 2013 8:50am
Anonymous
23rd Apr 2014 2:49pm
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23rd Apr 2014 5:36pm
thank you for your kind words
but tell me
how does one
find help
in a World of the blind
and ignorant
to find a people WHO are not
would be like winning the lottory
untill then
i will just have to suffer
the pain and dispair
of commonsense
a little Logic
of being aware
but tell me
how does one
find help
in a World of the blind
and ignorant
to find a people WHO are not
would be like winning the lottory
untill then
i will just have to suffer
the pain and dispair
of commonsense
a little Logic
of being aware
Anonymous
8th May 2014 6:37pm
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9th May 2014 5:00am
