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Suffering debriefing

Have you ever danced with the devil in the pale moonlight. Seen a fallen angel when it looses flight. Rolled through the vats of hell. Just to return to your piece of heaven and feel like you no longer belong. Can no longer dance cause you can no longer feel the music or hear the song. This wont appeal to all. Some will stop reading quick. In short im not writing for you. I'm writing to reach those who know this pain. The ones who feel they bare much shame. Your not forgotten, there are those who understand. Your hearts not dead your souls not gone. Get up and dust of that sand.
Written by Jiminex
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I accept honest criticism if you send and i agree ill fix if i dont. Do not take offense there are reasons i wont explain why i wrote this way today.
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