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MY BLACK HEART VALENTINE 🖤
IN A DARK PLACE. . .
Shaped to fit in a form in which the body owns...
No distance or a face. . .
Marooned in what emptiness zones. . .
No time that can race. . .
Many obscuring in replica clones. . .
ALL ALONE. . .
IN A TEMPLE ASYLUM OF SADNESS. . .
MY SENTIMENTS TO NO ONE I HAVE SHOWN. . .
NOT EVEN IN A WORLDS TRUE MADNESS. . .
EXCEPT. . .
Only one. . .
I have in long days in the past. . .
Written letters to the beauty of someone. . .
Who my breath longing to wait for and last. . .
Always hoping you could spare me a little stare...
A smile I could see from a mile. . .
A million years I would even then still share. . .
My simple foggy black heart still bedims a glare...
That lights only in between of its core. . .
On what's left merely for you to repair. . .
With the Simplicity of your touch,
Not so much. . .
Just enough. . .
Helping then to blaze more. . .
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
WHAT A BLACK HEART BESTOWS INSIDE ME
A sanctuary of roses. . .
Where I'm waiting for you there
A path of butterflies to you then coaches. . .
Your amazement to see loveliness everywhere...
As the princess approaches. . .
Fireflies start glowing, conveying radiance. . .
upon her hair. . .
The wind blows a fragrance. . .
being so unique and rare. . .
That's how you will know how much I care. . .
In all, I rest in my humble chest. . .
My true feelings and all its bleedings. . .
I bury in a sacred crest. . .
Hiding it from family and friends. . .
And from all the rest. . .
Solely for thee that can unlock the sealed ends...
A key that will be found as you truly quest. . .
MY REALITY NOW
The truth that your eyes would not see who I
am...
The truth that you see me as just a plain man...
Nothing popular as all who you around stand...
I just wish to even hold your lovely hand...
BUT...
I'm just an emo--
A creep--
A weirdo--
Stays up late hardly any sleep
Sleeping beauty is on my mind
Dreaming if one day I'll ever keep
Stars guiding me in darkness so to you I can find
A guy in all black
That carries very little in his backpack
Always checking watching my back
Haters scorn me and try to attack
BUT...
Above all that...
I maintain my dark side...
A little to the light side...
For only one thing keeps me going...
Keeps me showing...
Keeps me growing...
YOU...
Hope and believing in your heart...
That one day it'll be for me...
I'd promise that never would I break it apart...
To know what I mean, I'll help you see...
Here I enclosed a marble black heart for you...
It is small...
Not much is it,
As it is, how it is and true...
It holds my massive love and all...
A faded low light in between it...
it's the little bit...
That still stays lit...
My heart is your heart to fit...
Your aroma that would give it a token glint...
So I dismiss, dear miss...
Leaving you my last crush letter...
As many you ignored to your convenience...
My writings to you with a black swans feather...
A kiss I wish from those beautiful lips...
But instead here's this...
My friendly gesture here it is...
"HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY"...
WILL YOU BE MINE?...
WHAT WILL THY RED HEART SAY?...
FROM YOUR BLACK HEART VALENTINE 🖤...
Published 24th Jan 2020
| Edited 25th Jan 2020
Author's Note
A CRUSH VALENTINE LOVE LETTER FROM AN OUTCASTED EMO IN LOVE WITH A VERY POPULAR GIRL IN SCHOOL OR ANY CLOSE RELATED PLACE....
THE ART PIC IS MINE CREATED IN ART APP AND OTHER EDITINGS....
THE ART PIC IS MINE CREATED IN ART APP AND OTHER EDITINGS....
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24th Jan 2020 6:03pm
beautiful composed with the depth and deepness of a loving and caring heart...respect dear poetess love the artwork you are getting real creative in so many ways
24th Jan 2020 6:20pm
Thank you so much Stoney, I worked hard on this YESTERDAY LOL It was difficult getting it constructed to how I wanted it to be and finally did. My first emo type love crush poem I ever wrote for valentines lol
I can't even believe I did it, but happy cause I can write strong romantic dark poems.
I entered it for the crush love competition and I have another there too. I'm just posting as many crush poems that I can cause others posting more then one so I'll do the same lol
I can't even believe I did it, but happy cause I can write strong romantic dark poems.
I entered it for the crush love competition and I have another there too. I'm just posting as many crush poems that I can cause others posting more then one so I'll do the same lol
24th Jan 2020 7:35pm
That's how you do put it out there for all to read and enjoy thanks for sharing your thoughts on a beautiful day to come...respect
throughout this spill
i kept thinking about unrequited love and how often it can turn on us
into something much darker
and for some reason Your < emo, creep & weirdo > reference caused me to think about
Radiohead's Creep, song that a good friend told me was me and i didn't get it until i heard the song.
Loved Your emotional depth to this spill
i kept thinking about unrequited love and how often it can turn on us
into something much darker
and for some reason Your < emo, creep & weirdo > reference caused me to think about
Radiohead's Creep, song that a good friend told me was me and i didn't get it until i heard the song.
Loved Your emotional depth to this spill
24th Jan 2020 7:44pm
Haha...
Yea I actually love that song creep by radio head.
I didn't think about creep song as I wrote till you mention it lol
Well I guess that song fits this poem now I want to hear the song lol
Thanks for liking 🤗❤
Yea I actually love that song creep by radio head.
I didn't think about creep song as I wrote till you mention it lol
Well I guess that song fits this poem now I want to hear the song lol
Thanks for liking 🤗❤
16th Feb 2020 1:31pm
A truly exquisite read from beginning to end! I'm impressed with the sequence...You take the reader on a long, captivating ride that we FEEL from beginning to end...Just as impressed from a technical poetic standpoint! You've given me ideas...food for thought...! Much appreciated!
