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Everything I see reminds me of her
Everything I see reminds me of her
Smoothed asphalt like her skin
Mountain picks point to the sky like the nipples erect
Valleys cover and divided roads much like legs spread well groomed
Coal like hair jet black
Lips color of rubies
Eyes sparkle like stars at night
Smile brighter than the sun beams
By nutbuster
Smoothed asphalt like her skin
Mountain picks point to the sky like the nipples erect
Valleys cover and divided roads much like legs spread well groomed
Coal like hair jet black
Lips color of rubies
Eyes sparkle like stars at night
Smile brighter than the sun beams
By nutbuster
Published 18th Jan 2020
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18th Jan 2020 8:29pm
Pictures are always around us of those we love. Moments we shared stay locked in a safe within our minds. We never want to lose that. I am glad you shared your inner thoughts and showed passion for what you care for. Things can become lost but we try to keep them from going away. Well written and I could feel the passion in this. Great job.
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