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me?
Who am I?
A girl with an uncommon name
A doormat, slave, and a maid.
Who am I ?
Someone confused by normalcy
A fake smile for the world to see.
Who am I?
A mother of 3 and loving wife
Struggling, fighting, for her own life.
Diseased. Disturbed. Misunderstood. Liar. Lover. Up to no good.
Hateful. Spiteful. Crazy. Beautiful yet ugly. Miserable. Defected.
Vulgar. Vain. Giving in to all my pain.
ALONE....
A girl with an uncommon name
A doormat, slave, and a maid.
Who am I ?
Someone confused by normalcy
A fake smile for the world to see.
Who am I?
A mother of 3 and loving wife
Struggling, fighting, for her own life.
Diseased. Disturbed. Misunderstood. Liar. Lover. Up to no good.
Hateful. Spiteful. Crazy. Beautiful yet ugly. Miserable. Defected.
Vulgar. Vain. Giving in to all my pain.
ALONE....
Published 2nd Jan 2012
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22nd Feb 2012 5:06pm
I really loved the way you set this poem up. The rhyme is great and so is the flow.
Plus I can relate
Plus I can relate
22nd Feb 2012 9:30pm
Thank you very much. It's hard living a life that doesn't seem to be quite yours, or having a disease and because I'm a strong women people just expect me to always be strong. No crying no complaining, nobody is listening!
23rd Feb 2012 4:28am
I understand all to well!
I to am a strong independent women
But sometimes the little girl inside me screams for help..
That's why I love this poem
Keep it up and I will listen. Now I expect great poems outta you lol
I to am a strong independent women
But sometimes the little girl inside me screams for help..
That's why I love this poem
Keep it up and I will listen. Now I expect great poems outta you lol
