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THE SPECIAL JAR
What is that?
What do I see from far?
Wait a minute...
That's a cat...
Looking through a glass jar...
Getting close I can now see...
Why the cat is looking through a jar
So mesmerized as it doesn't notice me
It sees a spider...
Pretty cool but yet bizarre...
As now the cats' eyes get even wider...
The creepy crawler begins to dance
Is why the cat is so amazed,
Sounds funny but so am I...
As I never have seen a spider prance
Look how there's an audience now made
Now I'm drawn just look at my eyes...
Four eyes now gazing
In Excitement
This is just so amazing
Sustaining us in such astonishment...
I can't even move
It's unbelievably ravishing...
Just look at how it can groove...
Wowsers!!!!
What is this???
As witnessing and what tends to captures
Now I definitely don't want to miss
The spider brings out a guitar
It Is jamming like a pro star...
How extraordinary!!!
There's a spider playing the guitar in a jar!!!
Now that is Legendary!!!!
What an impact...
As for how we are now in a stance
How it leaves even the cat???
Why we are locked in a trance...
Now that spidy is no doubt phat!!!
I can't take this any longer!!!
This spider has a huge miracle gift!!!
Has to be set free...
I'll do it, as the jar I lift
So carefully...
It jumps out and is so happy...
Wow how I feel like a hero with a power
That I have passionately inside of me...
It plays it's guitar as it starts to flee...
Not looking back
But suddenly, shockingly...
Do I hear it sing???
No, it can't be...
We are stunned but hey how epic is that??
Now that is a talent that's never been seen
Can you imagine seeing a spider
With such surprises
That not even the cat could sink in...
It's what needs to be a fame idol
Bringing hope to all shapes and sizes...
Everything is possible
Even if it is something irrational...
The beauty of its black image.
Shows a promise
That motivation can engage
To those that are honest...
Nothing is a mystery in unique change
THE SPIDERS SONG.....
In every aspect we expose
In every word we enclose
Let your heart and love rose
Never deny your shadow as it grows...
What do I see from far?
Wait a minute...
That's a cat...
Looking through a glass jar...
Getting close I can now see...
Why the cat is looking through a jar
So mesmerized as it doesn't notice me
It sees a spider...
Pretty cool but yet bizarre...
As now the cats' eyes get even wider...
The creepy crawler begins to dance
Is why the cat is so amazed,
Sounds funny but so am I...
As I never have seen a spider prance
Look how there's an audience now made
Now I'm drawn just look at my eyes...
Four eyes now gazing
In Excitement
This is just so amazing
Sustaining us in such astonishment...
I can't even move
It's unbelievably ravishing...
Just look at how it can groove...
Wowsers!!!!
What is this???
As witnessing and what tends to captures
Now I definitely don't want to miss
The spider brings out a guitar
It Is jamming like a pro star...
How extraordinary!!!
There's a spider playing the guitar in a jar!!!
Now that is Legendary!!!!
What an impact...
As for how we are now in a stance
How it leaves even the cat???
Why we are locked in a trance...
Now that spidy is no doubt phat!!!
I can't take this any longer!!!
This spider has a huge miracle gift!!!
Has to be set free...
I'll do it, as the jar I lift
So carefully...
It jumps out and is so happy...
Wow how I feel like a hero with a power
That I have passionately inside of me...
It plays it's guitar as it starts to flee...
Not looking back
But suddenly, shockingly...
Do I hear it sing???
No, it can't be...
We are stunned but hey how epic is that??
Now that is a talent that's never been seen
Can you imagine seeing a spider
With such surprises
That not even the cat could sink in...
It's what needs to be a fame idol
Bringing hope to all shapes and sizes...
Everything is possible
Even if it is something irrational...
The beauty of its black image.
Shows a promise
That motivation can engage
To those that are honest...
Nothing is a mystery in unique change
THE SPIDERS SONG.....
In every aspect we expose
In every word we enclose
Let your heart and love rose
Never deny your shadow as it grows...
Published 10th Jan 2020
Author's Note
A CUTE FANTASY IMAGINABLE POEM FOR KIDS BASICALLY.... I STILL LOVE THIS I CREATED WITH LOTS HUMOR AND LOVE HOPE ALL LIKE. HEY IF YOU GOT KIDS READ THEM THIS AND SEE IF THEY WILL LIKE AND LET ME KNOW HAHA...
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10th Jan 2020 4:38pm
10th Jan 2020 4:51pm
This had a Theodor Seuss flair to it
Enjoyable read
Have You written a Children's Book, yet?
Enjoyable read
Have You written a Children's Book, yet?
10th Jan 2020 5:35pm
Thanks hun a bunch and I am in love with this cute kids poem too. It makes me laugh and smile. It is really fun to read.
But no i never have but always wanted to as kids books do rhyme to be honest so must be poetry lol...
After writing this I feel i should write a kids story book hey maybe might be this poem story haha...
Yea i love Dr Suess
And didn't think of it like that but yeah sounds almost like a version of the cat in the hat book haha...
Well i made a cool story too lol
Thanks hun...
But no i never have but always wanted to as kids books do rhyme to be honest so must be poetry lol...
After writing this I feel i should write a kids story book hey maybe might be this poem story haha...
Yea i love Dr Suess
And didn't think of it like that but yeah sounds almost like a version of the cat in the hat book haha...
Well i made a cool story too lol
Thanks hun...
10th Jan 2020 5:43pm
Most Kid's story books rhyme as it's a method of helping kids read and makes it fun for everyone.
(i was a Child Development Major in college and did my internship at a college Child Dev Ctr and got to do flannel stories and other projects for kids, ages 4 to 6 )
Maybe You should do a book and have You child help You with input -- sounds like fun to me.
My Step-Daughter and me invented a Drawing Game and i keep telling her to get it into production and she can have all the $$ just give me a wee bit of recognition.
(i was a Child Development Major in college and did my internship at a college Child Dev Ctr and got to do flannel stories and other projects for kids, ages 4 to 6 )
Maybe You should do a book and have You child help You with input -- sounds like fun to me.
My Step-Daughter and me invented a Drawing Game and i keep telling her to get it into production and she can have all the $$ just give me a wee bit of recognition.
That's really awesome, and yes it does help a child learn read better. I actually just let my mind act goofy with this story poem and we'll it came out like that haha...
But i want try making my own art to it as i think would be a simple thing to do as it's just a cat child a jar and the famous the spider and it's guitar lol so if it gets published into a book, I'll have art ready and won't have to hire an illustrator. I think it would make it a book as i seen others very simple kids books and made it im sure the would make it too, i have a feeling it would.
Yea it's great you have a big bond with your stepchild. Yea her helping helps a lot and i try doing same with mine she does give me ideas like for a bird she said she wants it having a long long beak i said ok so i wrote fien her ideas and anything ill credit her and if this poem gets to become popular as a book, then I'll give my princess her a lot from it. She didn't help me with this poem but ill still give her royalties ha ha besides im trying find a way to raise money funds for her college in futureure, so yes...
But i want try making my own art to it as i think would be a simple thing to do as it's just a cat child a jar and the famous the spider and it's guitar lol so if it gets published into a book, I'll have art ready and won't have to hire an illustrator. I think it would make it a book as i seen others very simple kids books and made it im sure the would make it too, i have a feeling it would.
Yea it's great you have a big bond with your stepchild. Yea her helping helps a lot and i try doing same with mine she does give me ideas like for a bird she said she wants it having a long long beak i said ok so i wrote fien her ideas and anything ill credit her and if this poem gets to become popular as a book, then I'll give my princess her a lot from it. She didn't help me with this poem but ill still give her royalties ha ha besides im trying find a way to raise money funds for her college in futureure, so yes...
10th Jan 2020 7:05pm
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10th Jan 2020 10:55pm
Such a fun interesting poem, a published book would bring delight and magic to both adults and children as they share it. Beautiful 🙂
10th Jan 2020 11:35pm
Thank you so much, I definitely tend to, since I got many ideas to write about and for kids too.
