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My Place (of refuge)
My place is off somewhere
and there isn't any fear
or hate…
or greed…
or jealousy.
the grass is always green…
in my place...and the sun shines
and flowers bloom
all year...there.
and the streams going down to
the sea are clean and clear…
There is also a forest in my place…
a big…
cool…
green…
majestic forest...
with blue butterflies
and a deep...black...pool
with silver fishes in it
and tall reeds growing near.
And I go...very softly after
a while to lie by the pool...
*I wrote this first poem when I was 14 and struggling with teenage angst*
and there isn't any fear
or hate…
or greed…
or jealousy.
the grass is always green…
in my place...and the sun shines
and flowers bloom
all year...there.
and the streams going down to
the sea are clean and clear…
There is also a forest in my place…
a big…
cool…
green…
majestic forest...
with blue butterflies
and a deep...black...pool
with silver fishes in it
and tall reeds growing near.
And I go...very softly after
a while to lie by the pool...
*I wrote this first poem when I was 14 and struggling with teenage angst*
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