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WICKED WAVE
front passenger seat;
hips ride mine like a surfboard
on a wicked wave
hips ride mine like a surfboard
on a wicked wave
Published 4th Jan 2020
| Edited 5th Jan 2020
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5th Jan 2020 6:52am
5th Jan 2020 7:04am
5th Jan 2020 10:03am
nice imagery - very erotic
You might want to lose
a syllable in verse two
for a senryu
You might want to lose
a syllable in verse two
for a senryu
5th Jan 2020 8:04pm
5th Jan 2020 9:12pm
