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Thinking about forever.

I nearly let you drive away.
Couldn’t catch my breath
Stoic emotions collapsed
My mind racing.
How your eyes drew mine in
The first passions of our love.
Your gentle touch.
The warmth in your presence.
Years
Tears.
Uncharted seas
Calm sunny days.
Our children’s laughter
Smiles on their faces.
All of me, loves, all of you
Fire and the flood.
Melodies
Memories.
Battles
Wars.
Deserving better, it’s
Yours.
I promise!
Your mine.
I’ll love you forever.
I’m glad you stayed.
I’ve been thinking about forever…
Written by Donovan_C93 (Donovan Carpenter)
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Author's Note
When I almost lost the love of my life.

(Feel free to help me out on the formatting, I’m trying to get better at it)
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