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The Cavern
The ebony of your eyes
Falling into a cavern of love
A light at the bottom
A light that this heart follows without fear
Your long hair drapes around your shoulders
A body, a heart of love, lust
An eternity a desire to spend it with
Those eyes, that smile
Locked in her arms around holding tight
Beauty has arrived to enter his heart
Beauty has arrived to enter his life
Love was found at the bottom of the well
A fear of falling but no more
As he looked into her eyes
Falling into a cavern of love
A light at the bottom
A light that this heart follows without fear
Your long hair drapes around your shoulders
A body, a heart of love, lust
An eternity a desire to spend it with
Those eyes, that smile
Locked in her arms around holding tight
Beauty has arrived to enter his heart
Beauty has arrived to enter his life
Love was found at the bottom of the well
A fear of falling but no more
As he looked into her eyes
Published 27th Dec 2019
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28th Dec 2019 11:45am
29th Dec 2019 00:18am
Thanks for the comment SweetO Love seems to bring out intensity at times : )
29th Dec 2019 8:10pm
29th Dec 2019 10:55pm
29th Dec 2019 11:15pm
30th Dec 2019 1:22am
Why thanks you once again but your poems are so great as well SweetO and I try to get better with each one I write. Working on music at the moment so poems have taken a backseat to lyrics.
4th Jan 2020 1:35am
This is so passionate and lovely. That first stanza did it for me! :)
"The ebony of your eyes
Falling into a cavern of love
A light at the bottom
A light that this heart follows without fear"
Such a gorgeous, heartfelt, and wonderfully creative spill. Awesome writing, Stanhoven! Loved it! <3
"The ebony of your eyes
Falling into a cavern of love
A light at the bottom
A light that this heart follows without fear"
Such a gorgeous, heartfelt, and wonderfully creative spill. Awesome writing, Stanhoven! Loved it! <3
Thanks for the comment glad it did something for you as that is what us poets long to do when writing. Now to go over and read your ink, and also thanks for the RL add.
Cheers
Cheers
4th Jan 2020 2:11am
