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Crack A Pot /Crack A Lot
How do you crack a pot, my dear
Old crack-pot?
Pots crack
of their own accord usually in-step
wit the reigning discord.
Pots cracked
in Holocaust, Hiroshima, Nagasaki,
etc..Etc, (&so on)
Pots cracked unto
Holy Inquisition.
(human)Bone-domes' pots is
The best to crack.....There, nothing
can compare. Bone shards, litter'all
pieces & bits, marinated, splatterated
in it's own neuro-juicies. The Soup
of the gods'
o w n
insistent want (unto a)
never'ending need
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2019dankozakdkzk Pooteries & primal pix
Published 22nd Dec 2019
Author's Note
The old gray mare she ain't what she used to be, many long years ago.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Anonymous
22nd Dec 2019 12:35pm
Goodness!
"neverending hysterics"
Hysterics seems a bit out of place ....?
I would go with "hunger" or "hankerings".
"neverending hysterics"
Hysterics seems a bit out of place ....?
I would go with "hunger" or "hankerings".
22nd Dec 2019 2:20pm
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2019 2:32pm
Yummmm. I will buy you a Hamburger Tuesday if you revise it today.
I'll get you a Tuesda Hamburger any-way.
but methinks the revision I revised with is 'worse', and more out-of-place,
yet,
some how appeals to me more. Hu-ray for paradoxymoronia !
& then (again), the poom, as a hole,
just ain't worth the time it has taken to scrutinize it.
but methinks the revision I revised with is 'worse', and more out-of-place,
yet,
some how appeals to me more. Hu-ray for paradoxymoronia !
& then (again), the poom, as a hole,
just ain't worth the time it has taken to scrutinize it.
Anonymous
22nd Dec 2019 3:37pm
Hush your mouth! That's blasphemy!
