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Her Mercy

She fucks me like meteors beating the earth into orbit
I am at the mercy of a greater force
Shaping my obedient form
Designing my purpose from the start
Nothing existed before this
Big bang
 
She colors my canvas in night skies and twilight
Nothing but potential until her paintbrush bathes my body in bruise blues
Beautiful blooming burgundy
Passion painted purple polychrome pleasure
Dyed deep indigo desire
Devotion on display
 
She conducts a chorus of wordless worship hymns
Drawing longing from my lips  
Composing prayers on the instruments of my limbs
Instilling submission
She will save my soul
My holy penance
I am blessed in her presence
Committed to service
Divinely devout
Directionless without
 
She frees me with shackles
By lock and key I am released in arrest
Leashed I am liberated
Captive and captivated
I am a privileged prisoner
Emancipated
Bearing obdurate ingraciating chains
Complacently contained by a callous gracious jailer  
 
I beg her
Beat me obedient
I implore her
Break me beautifully  
I pray to her
Sanctify my sins
I plead her
Deny me parole
 
I am at her mercy
May she have none
Written by comfortablydumb97 (Just CJ)
Published
Author's Note
So this is my first submission, no pun intended. I really want to know what you think, what you would have done differently, and how I might improve. I write a lot of spoken word and this is a relatively unfamiliar format to me and my first finished erotic poem. Thank you for reading and thanks in advance for any feedback.
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