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Sliding Moonroof
Sliding moonroof
I blinked my eyes and time was gone...
Lying behind me on the highway...
Peaceful evening
I turn my whistling into melody...
It sounds like an advertisement for a mortuary
How to build a car in infinite streets
Goals that rhyme with roof and steering wheel:...
Hood, proof, aloof, ensuining silence and lucid dream
Hopes disappear safely into the roof lining
The car detaches itself from me in search of my personal guide
It is like experiencing the real Harvard's Graduate School of Design
... ...
I blinked my eyes and time was gone...
Lying behind me on the highway...
Peaceful evening
I turn my whistling into melody...
It sounds like an advertisement for a mortuary
How to build a car in infinite streets
Goals that rhyme with roof and steering wheel:...
Hood, proof, aloof, ensuining silence and lucid dream
Hopes disappear safely into the roof lining
The car detaches itself from me in search of my personal guide
It is like experiencing the real Harvard's Graduate School of Design
... ...
Published 19th Nov 2019
| Edited 20th Nov 2019
Author's Note
Sketch the car. My eyes see what looks real and what looks like it will be possible. The moonroof will take time and many trial and errors.
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- Edited 15th Feb 2025 10:45pm
19th Nov 2019 7:57pm
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It is not a song, it is a poem.
I have only just chosen that background music for my poem as I have done on other occasions.
...
So I have added an image of a sunroof / moonroof now.
... 😊
The interior of the car is then shielded by a moonroof which is a type of sunroof,...
... except that it is a transparent, sliding, tinted glass panel.
... 😊
I have only just chosen that background music for my poem as I have done on other occasions.
...
So I have added an image of a sunroof / moonroof now.
... 😊
The interior of the car is then shielded by a moonroof which is a type of sunroof,...
... except that it is a transparent, sliding, tinted glass panel.
... 😊
19th Nov 2019 10:26pm
19th Nov 2019 11:13pm
