Falling

Like I've said on many occasions, I have no grasp of meter. So I don't know if what I'm suggesting is feasible.

from

"that follow me to arms that hold your sway."

to

"that follow me to arms holding your sway."

It's a wonderful song, Raz.

Thanks for the suggestion JB, I don't like the double use of THAT in this line and I've played around with it trying to keep the count intact but always failed, your gerund may just be the answer I was looking for. Many thanks

I love the idea of spiders creating a safety harness for her.

The rhymes are perfect until the closing couplet...Intentional?

And thanks for getting in on the contest!