Seafoam Dream

I LOVE THIS poem!  It reminds me of the euphoric mania that is sometimes experienced by those with bipolar disorder. “The sky is mine, if only for a time, look at her shine, look at her shine.”
So beautiful and rhythmic and soft. No critique. :)

Incredible perspective. The feeling that inspired me was a hybrid of mania and serenity..and putting simplicity to such a paradox. Thank you kindly!

A couple of very dear friends come to mind when I read your poem.  You have left it open for one to create their own feeling around your words.  Well done

Thank you! Maybe this is the first piece I've ever written that can resonate with the readers in different ways. So warming that it did so with you

I like the emphasis, the creative non-formalist expression and the presentation.  I've read your other pieces and find that you've stretched yourself in "Seafoam Dream"...that's great!

Ah! Thank you! I've wondered but after your comment I'm more convinced...it's the pieces that spill from the soul in that organic moment, minimal edits..those are my best. Thank you , thank you!