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Suitor In Load
Call for your lover
wanting you all to himself
nay he doesn't care to share
Leave your fears by the fireside
imagination gone amuck
his desire too much to bare
He tried to assuage the wants to caress your body and enjoy vivacious sighs
But whenever he closes his eyes
Cupid’s devotion to mischief
produces the most definitive cries
To find another with the same influence that generates
comfort and trust
To massage the contours of fully engaged love making
secrets held close to the bust
The inescapable truth is
he is lost in dealing with
wants versus reality
Could be just the excess of ego
and the vestiges of commanding strong virility
wanting you all to himself
nay he doesn't care to share
Leave your fears by the fireside
imagination gone amuck
his desire too much to bare
He tried to assuage the wants to caress your body and enjoy vivacious sighs
But whenever he closes his eyes
Cupid’s devotion to mischief
produces the most definitive cries
To find another with the same influence that generates
comfort and trust
To massage the contours of fully engaged love making
secrets held close to the bust
The inescapable truth is
he is lost in dealing with
wants versus reality
Could be just the excess of ego
and the vestiges of commanding strong virility
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Re. Suitor In Load
11th Nov 2019 8:21pm
This line could be read more than one way (perhaps intentional):
"his desire too much to bare" [is it case of 'too much to bear' or meaning he wants 'too much to bare?']
"his desire too much to bare" [is it case of 'too much to bear' or meaning he wants 'too much to bare?']
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Re: Re. Suitor In Load
12th Nov 2019 1:25am
bare as in the verb
uncover (a part of the body or other thing) and expose it to view.
"he bared his chest to show his scar"
uncover (a part of the body or other thing) and expose it to view.
"he bared his chest to show his scar"
Re: Re. Suitor In Load
12th Nov 2019 6:22am
You hit one of my guesses. (The going naked bit is my favourite part of love scenes.)
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12th Nov 2019 1:29am
Yes and with one stalker tag and I may be done teaching at least in a public setting
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13th Nov 2019 5:42am
Bravo, Sir Jazz! The flow is marvelous in this piece...smooth Jazz. I really like this passage:
"To massage the contours of fully engaged love making"
Ah make love without distraction is a beautiful, not easily accomplished goal. Not impossible 😁 In the words of Muhammad Ali "impossible is just an opinion "
"To massage the contours of fully engaged love making"
Ah make love without distraction is a beautiful, not easily accomplished goal. Not impossible 😁 In the words of Muhammad Ali "impossible is just an opinion "
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14th Nov 2019 6:28am