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romancing suicide
..blade finds purpose with me..
..i am under sympathy of the elements..
..frequency at point of division sustains..
..on its center around us..
..layers of fuel pour out of us..
..lacking consideration of symmetry..
..and imagery superimposes itself..
..on the memories of us having existed..
..bleach complexion surfaced..
..fading into the water..
..depletion understood..
..endure to completion..
..fully realized of itself..
..exhale upon exit..
..i am under sympathy of the elements..
..frequency at point of division sustains..
..on its center around us..
..layers of fuel pour out of us..
..lacking consideration of symmetry..
..and imagery superimposes itself..
..on the memories of us having existed..
..bleach complexion surfaced..
..fading into the water..
..depletion understood..
..endure to completion..
..fully realized of itself..
..exhale upon exit..
Published 9th Jan 2010
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2010 7:52pm
An abstract and truly riveting conveyance of a suicidal mindset. As much as I adore your poems regarding grotesque sexuality, and I do, I think that these ones are somehow even better. The dark linguistic texture is almost chewable, and when read aloud it sends shivers down the spine. Rather like a Salvador Dali painting in it's vague and mysterious nature.
9th Jan 2010 11:46pm
thanks glad you dig this different style.. the poem "whiskey" was also rather subdued compared to my grotesque sexual stuff.. like I said in another response I write tons of stuff.. I've been archiving since about 2001.. and change my "voice" on paper and subject matter periodically.. some of my older stuff from high school which was acceptable enough I transferred from scribbles in notebooks onto my pc.. I haven't count in a while but last I check (a few years back) I had over 2000 pages worth of varying materials.. cheers!!
