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LOVING RÉVEILLE
Warm smile caressing
wraps rested body in joy
woke thinking of you
Deep green eyes shimmer
enliven my jaded soul
woke thinking of you
Voice of bright timbre
immerses me in kindness
woke thinking of you
wraps rested body in joy
woke thinking of you
Deep green eyes shimmer
enliven my jaded soul
woke thinking of you
Voice of bright timbre
immerses me in kindness
woke thinking of you
Published 28th Oct 2019
Author's Note
During my blissful snooze time I pondered a nurturing friend with whom I have had no contact in some time...I'll remedy this today. Oh, and I wrote this triptych of Senryu's.
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28th Oct 2019 3:49pm
Masterful Delivery as Always Gahddess
When romantic is Written with all its might, it is Art!!!
When romantic is Written with all its might, it is Art!!!
Thank you so much Soul! It was a wonderful experience to think on this person and remember how she makes me feel. I agree love and romance are arts that take a lifetime to master.
28th Oct 2019 4:59pm
28th Oct 2019 9:30pm
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- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
30th Oct 2019 11:48am
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30th Oct 2019 6:29pm
Thank you so much, Didi! I am glad you enjoyed this piece and others I've written. I feel great joy when I write I'm glad some of that Joy's shines through. 😁🙏
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
30th Oct 2019 8:19pm
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30th Oct 2019 12:26pm
Thank you so much LostGirl! I would have put s modifier before woke but that would my syllable count off 😁 I am glad you like the piece
10th Dec 2019 10:22pm
11th Dec 2019 5:31am
Thank you so much, Rachel. This is high praise coming one with your talent.
