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I reached out to you
In the shadows of a dream
You answered
With a whisper of flesh, brushing
And I sighed
A hint of a moan
Caught in my throat
In the shadows of a dream
You answered
With a whisper of flesh, brushing
And I sighed
A hint of a moan
Caught in my throat
Published 23rd Oct 2019
Author's Note
Found this in my sketch book/poetry dumping ground. I vaguely remember writing it down after a dream I had about someone, but I don't fully remember the dream or who it was about. Brains are weird.
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24th Oct 2019 7:07am
Short and sensuous. The 'whisper of flesh' leaves to imagination how the whisper was conveyed, intensifying the reader's enjoyment (By kiss or caress or the bare bodies coming alongside?)
24th Oct 2019 4:10pm
Thanks for the feedback, it is much appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed it ^.^
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- Edited 15th Dec 2019 7:45pm
2nd Nov 2019 7:01am
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