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Much of a Muchness
Why am I not surprised, that’s all you are
Our god, Oh no almighty
A abstract lie in my head.
With manmade inventions
To determine your scripture
How nice of you, to reveal yourself.
When all are just beliefs.
Apparently, I was born to hate god
From cross to cross
Explaining shit, when right’s not right
And wrong’s not wrong.
What is your formality of assumptions
Your pompous events
Why is all, just “God”?
Why don’t we ever ask
How stupidly selfish he is.
Our god, Oh no almighty
A abstract lie in my head.
With manmade inventions
To determine your scripture
How nice of you, to reveal yourself.
When all are just beliefs.
Apparently, I was born to hate god
From cross to cross
Explaining shit, when right’s not right
And wrong’s not wrong.
What is your formality of assumptions
Your pompous events
Why is all, just “God”?
Why don’t we ever ask
How stupidly selfish he is.
Published 8th Jan 2010
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8th Jan 2010 11:21pm
I always wonder what if there is or isnt a god.
Its like when ur in bad situations everythings worse and no one is ever there to help u.
Iv been through experiences though that make me beleive there is a god or at least something stronger than all of us.
Its like when ur in bad situations everythings worse and no one is ever there to help u.
Iv been through experiences though that make me beleive there is a god or at least something stronger than all of us.
9th Jan 2010 7:20pm
Unfortunatly, I havent had that oppotunity, all my life I was forced to believe in such a God. It's as if there is no choice.
9th Jan 2010 8:01pm
There is always a choice.
(G)god is a completely personal idea.
I like
'A abstract lie in my head.'
Sums him up, good and proper.
(G)god is a completely personal idea.
I like
'A abstract lie in my head.'
Sums him up, good and proper.
10th Jan 2010 8:51pm
11th Jan 2010 8:19pm
I love poems bitching at God.. check out my "letters to God" on my page if you get a chance.. I do some heavy duty angst ridden telling off of the almighty myself.. great first poem my friend.. keep going.. cheers!!
