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On the rocks
I'm a little fish out of water here
I was hooked in the shallows
And dragged to the deep
But the deeper I delved
The sharper the rocks
I never claimed to
Know the tide
But I know
I floundered
I was hooked in the shallows
And dragged to the deep
But the deeper I delved
The sharper the rocks
I never claimed to
Know the tide
But I know
I floundered
Published 13th Oct 2019
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- Edited 11th Dec 2020 6:45pm
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14th Oct 2019 00:08am
No way have you floundered, my friend. Follow the words of my friend above. He's been a bit disappointed himself, but Pandy is here to assure you both, you're amazing. And look at the epic awesome in this form & your soul spillage too! You haven't dredged through the right tides just yet. Again, read crim's poem about dup's depression. I get attention & still feel awkward amongst the flock. It took me a good year to have my voice heard.
Remember those "building blocks". I found a gem beneath the rubble of articulate words that set my soul on fire. All it takes is a spark to kindle a blaze. Don't fall to ashes just yet.. you have victory ahead of you! * hugs you tightly with encouragement* 💟
Remember those "building blocks". I found a gem beneath the rubble of articulate words that set my soul on fire. All it takes is a spark to kindle a blaze. Don't fall to ashes just yet.. you have victory ahead of you! * hugs you tightly with encouragement* 💟
14th Oct 2019 00:10am
14th Oct 2019 1:56am
Anonymous
18th Oct 2019 4:41pm
Great word play here!
