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X-ray vision
I can autops-see
Your guts
Your backbone
Your heart and insides.
I can dig deeper into you
Than you can.
You can lie
But you cannot hide
The truth of the lines
That are carved into your face
Like the canyons carved by
The winds of your exhaling soul.
Your guts
Your backbone
Your heart and insides.
I can dig deeper into you
Than you can.
You can lie
But you cannot hide
The truth of the lines
That are carved into your face
Like the canyons carved by
The winds of your exhaling soul.
Published 12th Oct 2019
Author's Note
Yup. You wear your soul on your face!
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12th Oct 2019 2:07pm
This is spot on, I think mostly it's found in the eyes. I notice the littlest subtleties, and nuances in body language, so I even know when the hubby has to pee! 😅
I love the word pLaY with autops[see]y.. very clever;) I just did something similar in "pink syllables"... I those that ideas that present themselves !
I love the word pLaY with autops[see]y.. very clever;) I just did something similar in "pink syllables"... I those that ideas that present themselves !
20th Oct 2019 00:17am
Thank you. I try less to write poetry and more to discover it already within language.
