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transformation
I was...
I blink and turn
to find I was no more
the lady I once knew
transformed by the pain
took flight
I blink and turn
to find I was no more
the lady I once knew
transformed by the pain
took flight
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
11th Oct 2019 1:24am
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Re: Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 1:31am
thank you dearest Ethan for the love it's deeply felt... you know it's funny you said that demons often chase me in my dreams I always escape them by flying free...
love & hugs...
Brenda ❤
love & hugs...
Brenda ❤
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Jun 2022 2:45am
11th Oct 2019 1:35am
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Re: Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 4:11am
thank you lovely Kitty for such a beautiful thought I deeply cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 2:47am
Re: Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 6:54am
thank you beautiful Kitty how did you know I was afraid? I will be brave knowing I will not be alone... I cherish you...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 4:30am
Dear B,
Oh boy! I sure do understand that scenario of looking in the mirror and gasping as I ask “who are you?” And it’s me answering back, but it doesn't look like the me I thought I remembered. Very powerful reflective write! No matter who you are today, we are shoulder to shoulder going to get through this world my friend! H🌷
Oh boy! I sure do understand that scenario of looking in the mirror and gasping as I ask “who are you?” And it’s me answering back, but it doesn't look like the me I thought I remembered. Very powerful reflective write! No matter who you are today, we are shoulder to shoulder going to get through this world my friend! H🌷
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Re: Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 6:56am
thank you beautiful Honoria for your understanding heart... yes that's it exactly I am no longer that girl... I have evolved being flavored and tempered by pain...we will get through this sister... I cherish you lady...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 5:41am
Re: Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 6:57am
aw thank you dearest Tim for such a beautiful comment that touched my heart deeply...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
11th Oct 2019 10:56am
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Re: Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 1:20pm
thank you dearest HF for your very thoughtful comment... yes I believe we are flavored with pain to bring about a beautiful metamorphoses slowly evolving into the being we are meant to be... I deeply appreciate you dear poet...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 12:28pm
very inspiring loved it... sometimes we think pain is only there to dig deeper into our soul but in fact PAIN isn't your enemy for pain is your strength as it gives you that encouragement to keep pushing on through the storm, for when one goes through the transformation of pain life slowly transforms you as an individual in heart mind and soul as you reemerge different then what and who you were before the pain for you become much stronger in mind and soul for you become A WARRIOR NO LONGER A SLAVE TO PAIN...RESPECT
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Re: Re. transformation
11th Oct 2019 2:20pm
thank you graciously dearest Stoney for your love and understanding heart... you always shine light on my pages with your wisdom...I will prevail pushing through to the end... I deeply appreciate your encouragement...we shall walk together as our journeys allow...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. transformation
12th Oct 2019 1:23pm
YOU ARE VERY WELCOME DEAR FRIEND FOR AS IN LIFE WITHOUT ENCOURAGEMENT THEN HOW CAN WE BECOME INSPIRE TO REACH BEYOND OUR THOUGHTS, AS WE CREATE FROM MERE ILLUSIONS OF THE MIND EXPOSING OUR TRUE DEPTH OF ONES SPIRITUAL SOUL, FOR IF WE DON'T ENCOURAGE OR INSPIRE ONE ANOTHER TO REACH OUR TRUE POTENTIAL OR TO REACH BEYOND THE STARS AND THE SKIES THEN WE BECOME LOST SOULS JUST PASSING THROUGH TIME AND SPACE...ONE LOVE WITH RESPECT
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